How to Start a Story? Capturing Imagination from the Get-Go

How to start a story

Starting a story is like drawing a map; it requires a beginning point that compels people to follow your chosen path. It's an art, a seduction of words, beckoning readers into worlds unseen.

So, how do you etch that very first landmark?

Find Your Lightning Bolt: The Opening Line

"It was a dark and stormy night," wrote Edward Bulwer-Lytton, setting a clichéd scene. Yet, such a line carves a vivid image into the mind. Your opening line is that lightning bolt – bright, striking, unforgettable. 

It must spark the entire storm of your narrative.

Crafting the Perfect Hook

The opening lines are your first act of enchantment. To start a story, begin with the unconventional. Picture George Orwell's "Nineteen Eighty-Four," where the clock strikes thirteen. It's odd, unnerving, and hooks the reader's attention instantly.

The First Few Lines: Setting the Stage

As the story begins, the first few lines serve as a threshold, inviting readers into the unknown. They are the crucial story hooks that, if well-crafted, grip the reader's curiosity.

Character: The Heartbeat of Your Story

Introduce your main character in their element or entirely out of it. Let us see them before they see us. Character development should start as soon as the character wakes, coloring the first few pages with their essence.

Voice: The Soul of Your Story

Your narrative voice should be as distinct as your fingerprints. A first-person narrator? Let their personality seep into every word. If it's a third person, maintain an omnipresence that's both commanding and subtle.

Painting the World: Sensory Detail

Give us the scent of a bright, cold day or the oppressive silence of a stormy night. The first paragraph should evoke senses, bathing the reader in the ambiance of your story's setting.

The Architecture of a Beginning

Blueprints and Foundations

Every good story needs a solid foundation. Lay down the key elements that will support the whole plot.

Building Blocks: The Opening Scene

Whether it's a character waking or an inciting incident, the opening scene must serve as a catalyst, moving the story forward in a way that makes sense to your audience.

In Medias Res: Starting in the Thick of It

Sometimes, starting stories in the heat of action (in medias res) is the jolt most readers need. It's like waking up mid-dream and running with it.

Bad Writing: A Stepping Stone

Refrain from the bad writing of a first draft. It's merely a ghost of what's to come. The writing process is iterative, sculpting the vague into the vivid.

Voices from the Pages: Distinctive Voice and Central Conflict

Let your main characters speak. Their dialogue is your story's pulse. A distinctive voice should echo throughout the story, carrying the central conflict and giving life to the other characters.

Engage with Authenticity: Real Life Inspiration

Real-life moments can provide inspiration. Tolstoy knew this when he penned the immortal line about every unhappy family. Draw from the well of life.

The First Person, Second Person, Own Way

The point of view is your compass. Will your first-person guide us through their psyche? Or will the second person claim the center stage?

The Next Tip: Keep Them Guessing

A great example is "The Metamorphosis" by Kafka. Why did Gregor Samsa turn into a bug? Who knows, but we're turning pages to find out.

A Better Idea: Challenge Expectations

When you think your first line is good, strive for better. Imagine if your grandmother exploded on the first page; wouldn't that be a story to tell?

Storytelling Alchemy

Turn the mundane into the magnificent. Every beginning is an alchemical process, transforming the base lead of ideas into the gold of immersive narrative.

In Conclusion: Just Start

There's a special pleasure in making things up. So write. Write with the first words that come to mind, then refine, reshape, and redefine. Your first story starts with a leap of faith.

In the end, it's about making that leap and trusting that your words will form the net to catch your readers. It's not just how to start a story; it's about daring to write one. Now, go forth and conquer that blank page – your story awaits.

Frequently Asked Questions About How to Start a Story

What's the best way to craft an opening line?

Your opening line is your first impression. Make it bold. Think, "It was a dark and stormy night" or "When he was nearly thirteen, my brother Jem got his arm badly broken at the elbow." It should whisper secrets or shout questions. Above all, it hooks the reader's attention.

How important are the first few lines of a story?

Vitally! The first few lines set the tone for the entire story. They're a promise of the journey. You're not just telling a story; you're offering an adventure.

What are a few critical elements to starting a story?

The key elements include:

  • A solid narrative voice can be an intimate first-person narrator or a distant third.

  • An inciting incident that propels the story forward.

  • Sensory detail to immerse most readers immediately.

Can you give me an example of character development in the first few pages?

Sure, take "The Catcher in the Rye". We meet Holden Caulfield and his unique outlook on life within the first few pages, showing how character development can begin from the very first sentence.

How do I know if my opening scene is engaging?

Read it out loud. Does it sound like the start of a story you'd want to hear? Imagine your opening scene on a bright, cold day. Does it shine or get lost in the brightness?

What's the difference between an opening line and an opening sentence?

Nothing, and everything. The first line is the hook; the first sentence can set the scene. But sometimes they're the same.

Do I start writing with an outline or dive into the creative process?

Some authors plot every detail, while others, like Stephen King, start a story "on the situation" and let the story's setting evolve. It's your call. Writing is personal; find your way.

How do I create a solid narrative voice from the beginning?

Think of your favorite novel. How did it make you feel? Channel that energy. Your writing voice should reflect the world you're inviting your readers into. It should be as distinctive as a fingerprint.

How do I keep the reader interested beyond the first paragraph?

Twist expectations. If your opening paragraph hints at a grandmother exploding, you better deliver a story that can keep up with such a startling image.

Are there any clichés to avoid when starting a story?

Clichés can be the death of creativity. If it starts with "It was a stormy night," it had better be the most original stormy night ever written. Twist the cliché, or better yet, make it fresh.

How crucial is the setting in the first few pages?

The story's setting is the ground your characters walk on. Paint it vividly, but only let it overshadow your characters if, of course, it's the central conflict.

Can my first draft be bad?

Every first draft needs improvement writing. But that's good. First drafts are meant to be reworked, reshaped, and refined. Embrace the mess!

Any tips for writing the beginning of a short story?

Short story beginnings are mercilessly short. Make every word count. Start as close to the end as you can. Let your readers hit the ground running.

Should I introduce all the main characters at the start?

If it makes sense for your story, introduce your main character and perhaps a supporting cast, but keep the stage open. Let others enter as the story unfolds.

How do other writers craft their story beginnings?

Learn from the greats. Stephen King lets his characters lead. Hemingway was all about the brief truth. J.K. Rowling crafted a distinctive voice in a real-life setting. Be as diverse as your bookshelf.

Any final piece of advice on how to start a story?

Write the beginning that makes you want to discover what happens next. Trust your instincts and tell the story that's in you. After all, if you're captivated, your readers will be too.

Robin Piree

I help filmmakers sell their ideas, get more clients, and make more money.

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